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Early Dawning of the Season

Early dawning of The Season, Close knit, yet far sighted. That jazz trio and song in the shadows, Lobbying One Hope, and One Light. A watchful gaze, piercing darkness, The eye of the night, mesmerizing in fullness. The sweep of The Spirit, Soaking, saturating…sequestering silence. Staring in stark realization, A clouded conscience, childish chagrin. The train of temperament, eluding its own path, And unto its own. Woeful remorse, within hapless emptiness I shudder. For if Thou hasten Thy Hand, Will I be ready for Heaven. http://after-tim.blogspot.com

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Date: 12/16/2011 7:59:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Titus. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. I am going to see if I can write something for a couple contests this weekend. Hope you find the inspiration to do the same. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours. Love, Carol
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Titus Loh
Date: 12/19/2011 4:43:00 AM
Always a pleasure hearing from you, Carol. Am sure you'll receive some inspiration as you diligently seek it. Blessed Christmas to you too. Titus.
Date: 12/16/2011 7:36:00 AM
I felt warmness around me, dancing through. Leon
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Titus Loh
Date: 12/19/2011 4:42:00 AM
Glad the piece brought such an emotion, Leon. Thanks for your kind comment. Titus.
Date: 12/16/2011 6:34:00 AM
Nicely deep. Day-vo.
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Titus Loh
Date: 12/19/2011 4:41:00 AM
Thanks Dave, pleasure having you here. Titus.

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