Eagle

eagle soaring above drifting on wayward winds descending down with talons out fish caught 02/02/2020 Modern OR Traditional Cinquain Poetry Contest Sponsored by William Kekaula

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Chris Green

Date: 2/24/2020 8:22:00 AM

Congrats on your win my talented friend. Now matter what you touch, beauty finds its way to our eyes.

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/24/2020 11:07:00 AM

Thank you Chris... what a kind thing to say! hugs

Jenish Somadas

Date: 2/23/2020 11:16:00 PM

Great imagery.. Wonderful win Sandra..

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/24/2020 11:07:00 AM

Thank you so much Jenish :) hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 2/23/2020 4:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Sandra, perfect poem with fantastic flow. Hugs Eve

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/23/2020 7:58:00 PM

Thank you so much Eve... hugs

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/7/2020 11:44:00 AM

These big birds that glide in the sky playing with the currents in the air fascinate me. My favorite eagle is the Fish Eagle - when we visit the Kruger National park, I simply must see a Fish Eagle with its beautiful white feathered breast perched on the highest branch of a tree, and always fairly close to water - I love this write and have faved it. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings and hugs Jennifer.

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/14/2020 8:37:00 PM

I don't think I have seen a fish eagle...we have bald eagles here, they didn't use to be around these parts nor did all these hawks but anymore anytime you look to the sky or trees you see the birds of prey

Charles Messina

Date: 2/6/2020 6:05:00 AM

Great Cinquain, Sandy. Wonderful imagery! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs x

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/14/2020 8:36:00 PM

thank you so much Charlie :) hugs

Ann Foster

Date: 2/4/2020 8:51:00 AM

breakfast... oh yeah... lovely... Ann

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/4/2020 2:38:00 PM

Thank you my friend Hugs

Paul Callus

Date: 2/4/2020 7:56:00 AM

Beautiful and vivid imagery in just 5 lines, Sandra. A poem that could 'prey' on our minds :) Warm regards // paul

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/4/2020 2:37:00 PM

Thank you so much Paul glad you could see this one :) huge

Jan Allison

Date: 2/3/2020 4:39:00 PM

Superb vivid imagery sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/3/2020 6:50:00 PM

Thank you so much Jan...i love watching them and the hawks on windy days... they appear to be having so much fun just gliding in the wind, but as much as i admire them, i fear them the same...i have had them come down at me and my dogs before...i always have my eyes to the skies now :) hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/3/2020 7:11:00 AM

A marvelous catch! Excellently written dearest, Sandra! Hugs xxx

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/3/2020 10:14:00 AM

Thank you so much Demetrios :) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 2/3/2020 6:57:00 AM

This was beautiful , I could picture this majestic creature as it stalked its prey. Wonderfully crafted Sandy. Best wishes in the contest

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/3/2020 10:14:00 AM

Thank you so much Chris...i am blessed to see them around here... hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/3/2020 6:01:00 AM

Oh yeah...you make me see it. Awesome imagery in a few words!

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/3/2020 10:13:00 AM

Thank you so much Kim :) hugs

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 2/2/2020 4:13:00 PM

Nice write Sandra, it must be great to see nature so close at hand.

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/2/2020 6:16:00 PM

Thank you so much Gordon, it is to an extent...when you worry about your pets next to you on a leash as they come down from the sky, it's a different feeling :) hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/2/2020 1:29:00 PM

I see eagle's dashing move.. descending--in your splendid imagery, Sandy. You have the gift of saying much in few words.

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/2/2020 1:35:00 PM

what a lovely thing to say Vijay, thank you so very much :) hugs

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 2/2/2020 1:20:00 PM

I can't say that is a lovely picture, but it is real - it is nature.

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/2/2020 1:26:00 PM

we have eagles living around here...i often spot them over the river watching...i have seen them catch prey... watched a cat narrowly escape a hawk's talons too... it is nature for sure... hugs