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Dust and Dreams

Dust and Dreams I felt so excited to see you arrive but now all you do is sit and derive Your beauty like a dream in you I saw the divine found my place in the scheme of all things due to be mine I feel so sad to see you neglected you great lump of wood dusty and rejected It is not your fault I say the fault is all mine how dare I bloody sit here sit here and whine You were to be my platform where one day I’d find my voice and now it all seems long gone and it is I who made the choice.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/22/2017 12:43:00 AM
So sad and beautifully penned. The emotion and words to self are very creatively expressed. I really like the ownership in your words, it's a refreshing change and surely not easy to feel or write. Great job! Terrific writing, I really enjoyed this:) Hope you are very well.
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Date: 9/9/2016 6:56:00 AM
Wonderfully written. I enjoyed it while reading, Fiona.
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Date: 5/11/2016 5:44:00 PM
Dear Fiona: Lovely write. Lovely read. Good for you. Leon
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Date: 3/26/2016 2:17:00 AM
WOW, you did not hold back, I love the way you expose what and how you feel. SKAT
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Date: 3/25/2016 4:22:00 PM
Excellent effort. I love the title and how it ties in with the poem itself!
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Date: 3/24/2016 8:15:00 PM
What marvelous blessing is choice, and such a curse. This prompted great reflection.
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Date: 3/21/2016 7:47:00 PM
well expressed Fiona,a mix write of emotions, enjoyed the poem. LINDA
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