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Melting sorrows drift toward tomorrow when sounds dance in hushed irrelevance. Sacred seconds are held in creation's tawny yolk as crystal waves of wind bid farewell to this day's fate. A single dove darts through cinnamon plumes in one last dance through heavens gate. With ageless dreams bathed in honey gold it wings its way in graceful sway. How fleeting life might slip from sight when passion yearns for its beholder. Reminders linger in the dusk of mysteries lost and treasures plundered. I stand this post as infinity spills across the sky and wonder fills the trueness of my heart... 07/20/2018 Dusk or Dawn Contest Sponsored by Emile Pinet First Place 08/02/2018

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Date: 3/14/2022 12:35:00 AM
How fleeting life might slip from sight… Stands out to me… -respect!!
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Date: 4/2/2022 1:21:00 AM
Thank you Ironic...
Date: 8/13/2021 2:04:00 AM
An enchanting poem, Charlie, worthy of that proud trophy it holds:)
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Date: 8/31/2021 7:12:00 AM
Thank you Jo...
Date: 8/10/2021 7:21:00 AM
A graceful sonnet, Charlie, I am so glad I came across it here in 2021, better late than never I say, and well worthy of the cup, lovely . . . : )
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Date: 8/31/2021 7:11:00 AM
Thank you Indiana...
Date: 1/16/2021 10:59:00 AM
Awesome poem, Charlie. So glad to see it in the 2020 PS Anthology ~
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Date: 1/17/2021 8:03:00 AM
Thank you Line...
Date: 8/29/2020 11:01:00 AM
Awesome
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Date: 8/29/2020 2:50:00 PM
Thank you Paghunda...
Date: 4/21/2020 11:36:00 PM
I have a good friend from Slovakia with me here called Charlie, so you're my very good friend okay. Congrats for winning the trophy. I enjoyed your poem. Absolutely impressive. Love and hugs.
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Date: 4/22/2020 12:03:00 PM
Thank you Gideon...
Date: 3/1/2020 5:26:00 PM
keep clicking on your poem old and new and cannot find one I have not read. That is cool though, to know you are someone whose entire work here i may have read. I did notice this was a TROPHY win for you, so you deserve a huge congrats for that.
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Date: 4/22/2020 12:02:00 PM
Thank you Andrea...
Date: 2/20/2020 1:49:00 PM
Absolute brilliance! Your sonnet is brilliant best!!
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Date: 4/22/2020 12:01:00 PM
THANK YOU KIRSH...
Date: 1/23/2020 5:42:00 PM
Hello Charlie Smith, congratulatoins on your win. I like the way you describe the dusk. i can see it as I read. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 4/22/2020 11:59:00 AM
Thank you Darlene...
Date: 10/23/2018 4:56:00 PM
Hi Charlie, firstly, much belated congratulations on this wonderful write giving you a top win in the contest. My friend, this is excellent poetry, a piece crafted by a true wordsmith. You bring dusk to life through your wonderful words. Images come so easily to the mind. Beautiful my friend, just beautiful. A fave. have a wonderful Wednesday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 10/24/2018 10:55:00 AM
Thank you Mike...
Date: 9/10/2018 6:10:00 PM
Charlie, I know your beautiful poem about Dusk amazed me the first time I read it, and I can see why you received so many comments and won a Trophy, and then another win in this 'most comments' contest! Congratulations! Sandra :)
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Date: 9/12/2018 10:50:00 AM
Thank you Sandra...
Date: 9/10/2018 7:44:00 AM
I couldn't move on without offering my congratulations Charlie! What a wonderful command of poetic language. I am in awe! Regards, Dean
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Date: 9/10/2018 9:24:00 AM
Thank you Dean...
Date: 9/9/2018 8:07:00 PM
Lovely, Charlie. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 9/10/2018 9:17:00 AM
Thank you Line...
Date: 9/9/2018 6:26:00 PM
So many superlatively poetic lines of exquisite delicacy. “Bid farewell to this day’s fate” has an ineffable quality, that lingers just beyond a mind’s attempt to grasp. Congratulations on your recognition.
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Date: 9/10/2018 9:12:00 AM
Thank you Mark...
Date: 9/1/2018 2:18:00 PM
Congratulations for this win with your fabulous poem! :)
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Date: 9/1/2018 2:27:00 PM
Thank you Heidi...
Date: 8/27/2018 1:43:00 PM
WOW, congratulations for your win, so much deserved. It is unbelievable how each phrase each word sounds so beautiful when read. I felt my heart beat faster, when finished, my brain connected so much, that it brought peace for me to accept my today tomorrow and after tomorow. Thank you i will be coming back soon. Terry xoxo
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Date: 8/28/2018 1:08:00 PM
Thank you Therese...
Date: 8/15/2018 4:47:00 AM
Congratulations!very beautiful poem.Have a great day!
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Date: 8/16/2018 9:24:00 AM
Thank you Kenisha...
Date: 8/13/2018 8:07:00 PM
Returning with well deserved congratulations, Charlie, for your excellent trophy win for this breathtaking beauty. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/14/2018 10:29:00 AM
Thanks again Susan...
Date: 8/12/2018 12:45:00 PM
Hello Charlie, Back to give you my hearty congratulations on your First Place Win!! (I mentioned in my original comment to you that I thought that would be case -- and it happened!!) A most outstanding poem for sure!! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 8/12/2018 3:20:00 PM
Thank you again Gary...
Date: 8/12/2018 10:22:00 AM
Lovely, Charlie. Congrats on your gold meal win.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 8/12/2018 10:32:00 AM
Thank you Line...
Date: 8/8/2018 7:59:00 AM
A beautiful and a worthy winner, Charlie:)
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Charlie Smith
Date: 8/8/2018 11:16:00 AM
Thank you Jo...
Date: 8/6/2018 12:38:00 AM
Just Beautiful. Well done Charlie.
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Date: 8/6/2018 11:11:00 AM
Thank you Francesca...
Date: 8/5/2018 1:42:00 PM
Big Congrats Charlie to win top
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Charlie Smith
Date: 8/6/2018 11:10:00 AM
Thank you Anisha...
Date: 8/4/2018 7:00:00 PM
I see I confused what I was writing down here when i said your name. I don't know why I said Constance. Probably just finished reading one of her poems and still had her name in my mind. Anyway, this was a very well deserved win
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Charlie Smith
Date: 8/5/2018 11:03:00 AM
No Biggie, thanks again Andrea...
Date: 8/4/2018 12:25:00 PM
Charlie, congrats on your trophy win for this beautiful verse, well deserved my friend! John
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Charlie Smith
Date: 8/4/2018 12:39:00 PM
Thank you John...
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