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Dry Land

At the end of the day as the large orange orb sank into the distance a misty pink glow sat upon the western sky in the stillness of the evening where not even a whisper of wind dared break the silence the oppressive heat of the day had slowly dissipated as dusk settled cooling the baked ground the summer heat blanched the grass, flowers and shrubs wilted they hungered with thirst clinging with hope for rain looking to the skies with promise a few clouds had drifted in giving little hope to the thirsty land.

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Date: 8/16/2021 2:27:00 PM
Very descriptive. Yes, I bet it's about your area. We too are in a drought.
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Date: 8/8/2021 10:59:00 PM
Hello Phyllis ... very nice verse indeed. We're the opposite right now; bleak; cold; and reminding us that is winter - thank you Phyllis - Lindsay
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Date: 7/29/2021 3:43:00 AM
Nicely done, Phyllis!
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/31/2021 10:44:00 AM
Thank you Kim. love phyl
Date: 7/28/2021 12:22:00 PM
- A sad theme, beautifully described, dear Phyllis - We have rain and 16 c ... not dry land ... do not have to water the flowers :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/31/2021 10:44:00 AM
We still did not get rain and getting very dry out there. Thankfully we have rain barrels to help with watering the garden which helps not having to use the tap water. love phyl
Date: 7/27/2021 8:30:00 PM
Well written, Phyllis, so many states are thirsty for rain.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/31/2021 10:34:00 AM
Thank Eve and yes it is dry in many places this year. love phyl
Date: 7/27/2021 6:35:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem, Phyl! Wonderfully descriptive. Blessings, Kim M
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/28/2021 11:56:00 AM
Thank you Kim. I do hope your area is not to dry this year. We have also had a very hot July which is not like us. love phyl

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