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Drunken Painter's Delusion

The purple moment of the canvassed dome Pink pastel orgies like Miami in the eighties A figure sits insignificantly on the periphery To be of her dream is to need to be seen In the drunken painter's delusion If she weren't so high there'd be no coral sky To chart our own dreams by August 9, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/18/2018 6:46:00 PM
I love your unique painting of our lady Luna Andrew. Congratulations on your wonderful placement! : )
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Date: 8/18/2018 2:18:00 PM
Thank you Andrew, this was both fun and thoughtful
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Date: 8/18/2018 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Date: 8/17/2018 1:50:00 AM
A fine little piece, Andrew, love the ending. Congrats! regards, Viv
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Date: 8/16/2018 8:08:00 PM
Wow..........I love that you took a look to the sky and saw a unique and different version with a painter's point of view! Well done! Congrats to you!
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Date: 8/16/2018 7:16:00 PM
Lovely poem, Andrew. Delightful. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/9/2018 9:32:00 PM
I like it. Especially that second line. xomo!
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