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I keep my peace, though there is none - Gelacio Y.Guillermo, The Returning Son cold i whisper to my palms even more so to the waters while i clench myself like a stone below this common ground next to darkness nobody knows me here here where daylight prior to its savings leaves no footfalls but shadows alone stalk me in silence captured by the vacuum pores of my body preparing for its earthly plunge warmth departs from my skin and fur like ripples on wave blown sand as the hours toss and turn and twist with all memories sunk deep before my thoughts go numb like ice below this common ground next to darkness cold i whisper

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Date: 10/6/2009 3:50:00 AM
Where have you disappeared man? Anyway, Congrats!
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Date: 9/29/2009 12:02:00 PM
Gino, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/26/2009 3:48:00 AM
Congrats 2u on your poem making it through to the finals, bravo!
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Date: 9/25/2009 3:10:00 PM
Interesting and artistic presentation. Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 10:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Gino. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/10/2009 7:17:00 AM
Cute poem.
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Date: 7/11/2009 8:25:00 AM
Congrats on your featured write. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 7/11/2009 4:23:00 AM
What a wonderful piece. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing & congratulations on your excelent piece being featured dis week. Great you Gino!
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Date: 7/9/2009 11:29:00 PM
Gino, congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 7/6/2009 1:28:00 PM
Congratulations on having this very well written poem featured. Enjoyed reading this one. Regards Heidie
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Date: 7/6/2009 11:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem>>James
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Date: 7/6/2009 6:51:00 AM
Awesome. Congratulations on your featured poem this week Gino. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2009 10:47:00 PM
Very beautiful and inspiring one. Keep on sharing and congratulations. Ernilando
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Date: 7/5/2009 8:08:00 PM
I whipser that this is beautiful congratulations on being featured .. Love Jayne
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Date: 5/3/2009 11:50:00 PM
Hey bro. Amazing stuff bro...keep rockin man.
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