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Droplet Lullaby

I close my eyes and drift away to a droplet lullaby, Carried aloft beyond life's cares On a cloud of rhythmic sighs. This serenade clears the mist Of worry and guilt and fear. A bead at a time, it washes my mind As peace and rest draw near. When the storms of life beat against me No matter what they try, I look for the soft rain to realign my soul With a droplet lullaby.

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Date: 11/21/2016 7:47:00 PM
Love your soothing lullaby, Jack. Well done, and congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra
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Jack Eldridge
Date: 11/24/2016 3:17:00 PM
Thanks for reading and the compliment
Date: 11/21/2016 2:17:00 PM
Beautiful, Jack. Congrats on your fine win. Elaine
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Jack Eldridge
Date: 11/24/2016 3:18:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 11/21/2016 8:03:00 AM
This is beautiful. Congrats on your win, Jack. Janice
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Jack Eldridge
Date: 11/24/2016 3:19:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 11/21/2016 7:38:00 AM
Very nice, Jack! Since you refer to a lullaby, were you inspired by children? It is a lovely piece! Congrats!
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Jack Eldridge
Date: 11/24/2016 3:25:00 PM
The rhythm of the rain has always been a haven of rest for me. Thank you
Date: 6/17/2016 6:31:00 AM
very flowing and sweet. just as a lullaby should be.
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Jack Eldridge
Date: 6/19/2016 3:03:00 PM
Thanks for the kind words
Date: 6/16/2016 10:22:00 PM
I like this, Jack! A nice soothing verse.
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Jack Eldridge
Date: 6/17/2016 5:32:00 AM
Thank you

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