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Drippy Dot World

*rain* pitter, drippy, drops on my windshield sad polka dot world falling in streaks of dull gray wipers -swish- 03252012 for Joann's Ninette contest :)

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/21/2012 8:57:00 PM

Nikko,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/17/2012 2:18:00 AM

this is so creative, millions of rain drops on windscreen all over the world, and you come up with this, wonderful and profound poem, Oh by the way when did i ever think you were a boy? love you. harry

Dalila Agtani

Date: 5/7/2012 7:32:00 PM

Nikko Kumosta ka na? Thank you for visiting my corner. I have been expecting more of your creative verses. Have you been on vacation from soup lately? Yes I have my college friend from Pinas visiting me for at least 6 months kasi yon lang ang limit ng multiple visa niya. Naku ang sarap ng feeling to reconnect with friends!! I am trying to interpret your drippy dot world. I hope the polka dots are multi colored not dull my dear! But I know you are a great poetess and you may mean something different. Hugs and love Dalila

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 3/31/2012 6:17:00 AM

my wipers NEVER work! Rain X helps! This poem helps too! Ha! LuvIT!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/29/2012 12:22:00 PM

thankxx sweetie for the heads up .. this "dragon" is a pain in my .... oh.. it is fast and makes mistakes too.. oh.. a great piece of drippy dot world.. I want to go there now luv..

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 3/28/2012 5:24:00 AM

Always a treat to read your creative verse Nikko; Wonderful feel of the rain in your verse! :)

Gautami Phookan

Date: 3/27/2012 8:07:00 AM

Cute ninette, rain as such is beautiful and more so when transformed into these polka dots and wipers going swish... Avery enjoyable read indeed. love..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2012 9:43:00 PM

wow, now I see YOURS after seeing Chris' and I think I have found another one that is VERY good. More visual one here. I sure hope it does well. Wish I could come up with one. Do I still have time? I am whizzing thru comments trying to catch up and have not even checked out contests still open!! Glad to be back and read your stuff. LUv, Andrea

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/26/2012 6:18:00 PM

Excellent entry Nikko. Rain makes me happy like the monsoons that are celebrated in India. This is sure to do well. Mahalo

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/26/2012 1:05:00 PM

Where do you get that HOTTIE thing from Missy???? *foncused* *mwahugs*

Jack Horne

Date: 3/25/2012 3:29:00 PM

I love the creative way you've captured a wet windscreen here, Nikko - definitely one of the best I've seen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/25/2012 11:38:00 AM

Wow! Love the line about the "sad polka dot world," Nikko. The first three lines are similar to one I wrote many years ago. I think you have a gem for Joann's contest. Winning wishes to you! Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/25/2012 10:44:00 AM

Ahhhhh " Nikko The Sweet" another beauty from your fingertips. Over here it's cloudy with a chance of showers so your write made me smile. Hugs stretched to reach your hands. Michael.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/25/2012 9:36:00 AM

u are too cool for words sweet friend Nikko.. aha.. I am back.. discharged tonight from hospital and home playing with my new computer program which types as I speak.. oh watch out now.. luv.. thankxx for all your luv ..prayers and comments.. so encouraging.. how is Mom doing????luv..

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/25/2012 3:19:00 AM

A vivid write Missy, I love your entry, especially your polka dot line ;) all the best with your drippy write Missy, enjoyed your unique theme! I see you and MJF is on my sweet and innocent case everywhere on the Soup :D how could you guys lmao *mwahugs* thanks for the laughs with your madness *CTH

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/24/2012 6:16:00 PM

A clever write, Nikko! I love your ninette. I also love the rain, but I hate driving in it. It does make for a sad, polka dot world. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 3/24/2012 3:01:00 PM

nice little write you have here nikko, the line "sad polka dot world" is so vivid; these ninettes are interesting, good luck in the contest :) charlotte

John Rhinem

Date: 3/24/2012 12:04:00 PM

Smile ˜ Yeap, That's It, 'Swish' ˜ I Have Come To Love Your Beautiful Heart ˜ I See The Precious & Pretty Amid It All, Beautiful Nikko ˜ Love Always, John!:) ˜

Kash Poet

Date: 3/24/2012 11:57:00 AM

An excellent write...Love it Nikko.