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Dreams of Childhood

"How sweet to the heart are the scenes of my childhood" Samuel Woodworth, 1785-1842 standing on the window of my friend’s house, we let childhood imaginations loose, fairy tale of gods demons we espouse. grassland with myriad flowers to choose, dragonflies, butterflies to play and chase, Jack farmer’s friendly talking sheep and goose! our dreams had wings, no reality base, killed enemy warriors in brave fight, our weapons were satchels or pencil case! however night saw the fall of our might, with darkness crept out our deep inner fear, close to mother we stayed, hiding our fright! life was full of love, yet purpose not clear, good old childhood days will always be dear! 1st placement Terza Rima Poetry contest Constance la France Written 18/11/2020 10 syllables each (PS counter) rhyme sequence as suggested! ABA BCB, CDC, DED, EE!

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Date: 11/30/2020 11:40:00 AM
Very nice picot you've painted Krish. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/30/2020 11:44:00 AM
Thanks Linda!!Greatly appreciate your supportive words!!
Date: 11/29/2020 7:02:00 AM
Hi Krish, Congratulations on your 1st place win;-) Alexis
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Date: 11/29/2020 7:06:00 AM
thanks Alexis! Thanks for your visit!
Date: 11/29/2020 5:49:00 AM
Especially like the second verse, Krish! Congratulations on 1st place!
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Date: 11/29/2020 5:56:00 AM
Thanks Kim! So pleased with your feedback! Thanks indeed!
Date: 11/29/2020 5:30:00 AM
Well done, Krish--BIG congrats on your TOP win.
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Date: 11/29/2020 5:56:00 AM
Thanks Vijay! Pleased it is liked! Thanks for your visit!:)
Date: 11/29/2020 1:28:00 AM
Krish, congratulations on your win in my Terza Rima Contest with this excellent and enchanting poem _Constance
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Date: 11/29/2020 1:43:00 AM
Constance, Thank you! Very happy to have tried this new format and enjoyed writing it! Thank you for hosting the contest and for your generosity in rewarding me with a top placement win!!:)
Date: 11/18/2020 9:32:00 AM
Lovely write ... best wishes in the contest :)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/18/2020 9:34:00 AM
Thanks Regina! Pleased to get your quick feedback!

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