Dreams

Dreams Like paper airplanes floating on the breeze forever drifting gently to and fro and guided freely with the greatest ease whichever way the wistful winds may blow, our deepest dreams will take us where they please. Just gliding through the clouds on gossamer wings and softly floating ‘cross the moonlit sky like paper airplanes unconstrained by strings, nocturnal dreams just gently float on high and bring us visions filled with magic things. And in the morning as we raise our head and clear the clouds out of our sleepy eyes, we will recall the dreams our conscience fed like paper airplane’s journey of surprise across the nighttime skies where we were led. September 1, 2022

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Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 9/24/2022 6:44:00 PM

This is truly magical John! Softly floating away in a beautiful dream. Love it! :-)

John Gondolf
Date: 9/24/2022 7:48:00 PM

Thank you so much, Anne, I’m glad you enjoyed it. John

Terry Miller

Date: 9/19/2022 1:34:00 AM

Excellent poem, a well-deserved win, congratulations

John Gondolf
Date: 9/19/2022 2:24:00 AM

Thanks, Terry, I appreciate it. John

Ann Peck

Date: 9/16/2022 10:41:00 AM

That's so beautiful and dreamy, John. Congratulations on your win!

John Gondolf
Date: 9/16/2022 4:37:00 PM

Thank you, Ann, I appreciate it. John

John Lawless

Date: 9/15/2022 6:17:00 AM

Great job John, the magical metaphoric whimsy of dreams metaphorically folded and set free. thanks for participating in the contest

John Gondolf
Date: 9/15/2022 6:44:00 AM

Thank you so much, John, I appreciate it, and thanks for inspiring these magical thoughts with your contest. John

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 9/13/2022 3:04:00 PM

A dreamy, magical read, I felt like the paper plane floating in the breeze, seeing visions of unusual and magic things. Wow! Marvellous read, Thank you, John. Take care, Shirley

John Gondolf
Date: 9/14/2022 6:47:00 AM

Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and comments, Shirley, yes, dreams can be magical. John

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/8/2022 1:43:00 AM

Those ageless paper airplanes will forever enthrall the child and the parent or grandparent that makes them. they fly up high into sky and rest on fluffy clouds, which conjures up spellbound moments for us whilst we are asleep. I have to fave this as I remember those paper airplanes so vividly, I hope i have a similar dream tonight John. A breathtaking poem and incredible imagination. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

John Gondolf
Date: 9/8/2022 6:17:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your thoughts and for saving this to your favorites, Jenn. I'm glad it brought you fond memories. Hugs, John

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/1/2022 7:27:00 PM

"our deepest dreams will take us where they please." Yes, they will, because anything is possible when you drift on a snow white cloud. This is so beautiful and dreamy, my dear friend. I'm floating in the sky, and I never wish to come down. May those magical moments continue to lift your heart. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

John Gondolf
Date: 9/3/2022 4:15:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Brandy, I’m glad my words lifted your spirit to the clouds. May you always be floating there in sweet dreams. Hugs, John

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/1/2022 4:36:00 PM

A dreamy image…we follow the gliding airplane.

John Gondolf
Date: 9/3/2022 4:11:00 AM

Thanks so much for your thoughts and comments, Kim, I appreciate it. John