Dramatic Moment

"Dramatic Moment" hearts carved in oak tree love engrained on wooden bark I cried as rain crashed lover buried beneath leaves death awaits sweet rendezvous. *For Suzette Crous's Tanka - The Pivot Contest

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Skat A

Date: 3/13/2014 2:58:00 AM

wow... love the imagery... ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/10/2012 3:12:00 PM

wow, such a heartfelt poem, enjoyed this...

Jack Horne

Date: 10/10/2012 10:05:00 AM

beautiful and sad write here, my friend - sure to do well in the contest. How are your hands today? I pray for some improvement for you xx

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/9/2012 3:39:00 PM

There is a silver lining with all of this...the sweet rendezvous...when we finally meet in heaven! We must look upon the positive or we'll go crazy and we'll never be happy again! I really enjoyed your write today as I have read it this evening! I have been busy all day today and have fallen behind in my daily commenting! But I had to read yours, for your poetry has a special flair to it that I really enjoy! Thanks for sharing this clever piece, Great Work!!

Alicia Lorraine Mathes

Date: 10/9/2012 2:28:00 PM

Truly Beautiful Linda. ~ Alicia Lorraine Mathes

Kash Poet

Date: 10/9/2012 9:10:00 AM

A touching heartfelt tanka by you Linda.Beautifully penned.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/9/2012 8:39:00 AM

thinking of those old romantic novels when happy endings were unfounded poets .. enjoy on this rainy day here in NJ ..luv