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Dormant Desert Dunes

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Such is love like dormant desert dunes amidst their decubitus decline, Bewitching barmecidal brides beckon my last drops of desire… Overwhelming obelus and ototoxic behavior in loves' great divide, For the howling desert winds evaporate my love through eviternity… Floccinaucinihilipilification flutters thru my mind upon dusty dunes. Decubitus...The posture adopted by a person who is lying down. Barmecidal...Illusory or imaginary and therefore disappointing. Obelus...Serving as the sign indicating a division. Eviternity...Eternal existence. Floccinaucinihilipilification...The action or habit of estimating something as worthless. I used these particular words...to show how sometimes love can be dormant & dying...plus dusty lol Feb.02.2020 Exalted Words Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke Placed 1'st...Thank You

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/19/2020 6:41:00 PM

Hello Winged Warrior, yes love can be a doormat dying. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/26/2020 12:14:00 PM

wow ^WW^ n wonder you got top billing with this one and great title too - i have posted a limerick inspired by one word lol I think that final long words sounds like some sort of medication lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 2/21/2020 5:58:00 PM

Oh yeah? You might have spelled them correctly, and used them properly in a sentence, but can you pronounce that last one? Dusty, dormant and dying..descriptive adjectives for a doomed love.and so it goes. Nice win, J.

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/22/2020 5:36:00 AM

Hi Laney...That's what you call D-Day for love lol...I can't even pronounce my own name...let alone that one lol...thanks for the visit my friend...just recovering from the flu...will catch up later...^WW^ :o)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/21/2020 2:03:00 PM

- Congratulations on your top win, W.W. :) - Well deserved :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/22/2020 6:06:00 AM

Thanks, dear Anne-Lise...your visit makes all the difference my friend...poetic love from the Wingster...^WW^ :o)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/21/2020 1:30:00 PM

Excellent WW! You deserve your wonderful trophy! Congratulations! xxoo

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/22/2020 6:04:00 AM

Thank you dear friend, Connie...coming from you, it means a lot...now wheres my trophy? lol...poetic love from the Wingster...^WW^ :o)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 2/21/2020 12:07:00 PM

You gotta be floccinaucinihilipilificating me! That word damn near makes my head explode just looking at it!...teeheehee. That being said, congratulations on your well-deserved trophy win, WW!:-) Well-done, sir.

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/22/2020 6:02:00 AM

Thank you dear sir...don't lose your head, Ed lol...we need great poets like you...^WW^ :o)

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/12/2020 11:23:00 AM

Wow, another brilliant poem , Wingster! You are amazing :)

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/22/2020 5:56:00 AM

I am amazed that you find me amazing...coming from an amazing friend like you, Heidi...poetic love from the Wingster...^WW^ :o)

Eve Roper

Date: 2/10/2020 3:47:00 PM

A love by dormant desert dunes, make the image of the pharaoh. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for congratulations on POTD. I too am the oldest having to watch the 6 little ones. Hugs Eve

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/22/2020 5:54:00 AM

I guess there is an advantage to being eldest...but remember what happened to the Pharaoh's firstborn...thanks dear friend...poetic love from the Wingster...^WW^ :o)

Anil Deo

Date: 2/10/2020 1:19:00 PM

Those big words made any kind of love an adventure ... These syllables got me celebrating Hippy Love: "cinihilipilification" I will recall for some reason. Thanks (shalom/Peace)

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/22/2020 5:50:00 AM

Groovy man...Sunshine and lollipops lol...thanks Anil...^WW^ :o)

John Watt

Date: 2/7/2020 5:41:00 PM

Wings, I shall try to use Floccinaucinihilipilification in a sentence today... NOT! I can't even read it, let alone remember it, LOL! I love it though, and I love that you used it in your poem and wrote out what it means. This is definitely not a barmecidal write... GL in the contest ~ John

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/22/2020 5:48:00 AM

Thank you, John...such a long word for a small meaning...must have been the Napoleon complex lol...^WW^ :o)

Maria Williams

Date: 2/4/2020 5:22:00 AM

You got me on the F one, where on earth do you find them? Good luck in the contest my dear friend....Maria Hugs

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/22/2020 5:42:00 AM

They just drop from the sky, like rain...now I'm all wet lol...thanks dear friend, Maria-hope all is good...poetic love from the Wingster...^WW^ :o)

Silent One

Date: 2/2/2020 12:54:00 PM

That's a big word....The F one....are you a walking talking dictionary? Lol

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/22/2020 5:37:00 AM

No lol...but when I was younger, they used to call me the walking talking TV guide lol...^WW^