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Golden epaulets smile A hint of vermouth Through an opened door

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/3/2012 3:21:00 PM
Hotel Crazy, eh? I'm kicking this on around, which is what is fun. Love, daver
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Date: 8/30/2012 8:59:00 AM
Well done,Kathryn.Nice words nicely placed.Luv,Fabiyas
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Date: 8/26/2012 2:27:00 PM
Very nice... few words, many images called to mind... love, Terry
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Date: 8/26/2012 12:08:00 PM
Yes, I can picture this exactly - clever write
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Date: 8/13/2012 12:52:00 PM
yeah great description,fine details,nice write Kathryn
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Date: 8/12/2012 11:32:00 AM
soup mail :)
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Date: 8/12/2012 8:51:00 AM
Oh, and I forgot to mention... 'almond petal pall?' slick alliteration and assonance! K.
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Date: 8/12/2012 8:48:00 AM
Tantalizing! So much to reflect upon from 11 perfectly selected words. The imagery is so vivid! BRAVO YOU!! Best wishes, Keith
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