Don'T Go

My soul crumbles like a tin can under pressure, when I see your suitcase waiting for a taxi. Please, don’t leave me this way; you’re the only thing that resonates with my sanity and madness, all intertwined into love that we had created for ourselves. I promise I’ll pick up the broken pieces of us, and fix piece by piece; I promise I’ll make it up for the tears you had shed when I hurt you. Please, give me another chance my Love; you are the only happiness that I’ve been left with…

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/1/2017 2:24:00 PM

In my son's youth a girl broke his heart and I could do nothing but listen. I told him one day the perfect person would mend his heart. She arrived a few years later and they have been married 15 years now. There is nothing like the pain of a broken heart. I think you expressed the agony of it well in this piece Teddy, though this is fictional. I was moved. Congrats. ; )

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/1/2017 5:14:00 PM

So sorry for your son's heartbreak, Connie. I'm glad he got his perfect match some years later! ;-) Thank you so much for your warm applause, and enjoying my piece!! *^_^*

Funom Makama

Date: 7/19/2017 1:47:00 PM

You just unzipped the covers of my mind to the unprecedented worship of your adorable lines with a powerful choice of words that can't just be ignored. Showers of your wisdom is well palpated in this page and the only thing I can say is a big WELL DONE! Can't wait to have more of your mental command flowing through my reading mind.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/20/2017 8:23:00 AM

Wow! Thank you so much Funom, for your kind comment. I really appreciate it! ;-)

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/14/2017 1:34:00 PM

Such a sad lament Teddy, hope it was fiction...

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/14/2017 3:44:00 PM

Yes, it's fictional. Thank you for reading and commenting on my piece, Charlie! :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/14/2017 5:57:00 AM

So touching, Teddy:) amazing:)

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/14/2017 3:43:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jo! :)