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Dog Days

Smelling of sweet nostalgia and sunscreen, the ghost of summers past comes to my side; her hot breath on my ear, she whispers "I miss you". "I wish you'd stayed longer," I sigh.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 10/3/2023 10:07:00 AM
Beautiful
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Date: 10/3/2023 6:48:00 AM
So true. Thanks for the poem.
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Date: 8/22/2021 6:32:00 PM
I like your sensory words. Welcome to Poetry Soup!
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Date: 8/21/2021 1:58:00 AM
Great first line, sets the scene. It's only when they go, you wish they'd stayed.
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Date: 8/20/2021 1:28:00 PM
Very nicely written.
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