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Do With Heart

If only for a moment our love bloomed, If only for a spell we would consume. My heart torn open I bear a deep wound, To be thy Sun and you to be my Moon. Alas, my dear, we were not meant to be, For there is no future for us at all. But, don't read into my words completely, Because I still answer to nature's call. Does a flower turn its petals away? In the day when the Sun is out to shine? For what is the reason that children play? The reason that the poet writes his line? We know deep inside, we all must take part, And whatever that may be, do with heart!

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Date: 6/24/2018 12:56:00 PM
Your last two lines say it all, especially the last one" whatever that may be, do with heart, I totally agree with you on this, this sure was a really nice poem and a joy to read
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Date: 6/22/2018 3:09:00 PM
Very lovely WW! A very belated Congratulations on your POTD honor! : ) I am so far behind in reading POTD poems.
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Date: 6/12/2018 11:21:00 PM
I couldn't agree more Brenda!!!!
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Date: 6/12/2018 9:30:00 PM
Now this is a sonnet! Very well written!
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Date: 6/12/2018 9:30:00 PM
Oh and congrats on POTD!!!!
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Date: 6/12/2018 1:47:00 AM
What a serene and beautiful POTD and wonderful piece, well done and congrats.
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Date: 6/11/2018 6:48:00 PM
Beautiful write WW..Congrats on POTD
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Date: 6/11/2018 6:19:00 PM
Wonderful work! Congratulations.
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Date: 6/11/2018 4:16:00 PM
many many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/11/2018 3:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved POTD WW, an exceptional sonnet a joy to read. :))
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Date: 6/11/2018 12:33:00 PM
Hello White Wolf,I have enjoyed this sonnet.It almost read as a love poem. Congratulationsfor P.O.T.D. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 6/11/2018 12:04:00 PM
Excellent White Wolf! Congrats on your POTD honors!
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Date: 6/11/2018 11:29:00 AM
Terrific write White Wolf, congratulations for POTD honors...
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Date: 6/11/2018 9:58:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 6/11/2018 9:21:00 AM
Such a lovely Sonnet, White Wolf, Congrats on POTD!!
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Date: 6/11/2018 8:52:00 AM
Love the poem, WW, congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/11/2018 6:40:00 AM
- Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d., W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/11/2018 6:25:00 AM
Back with POTD congratulations! :) xomo!
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Date: 6/11/2018 6:09:00 AM
Congrats!!! my old friend on your POTD!...beautifully rendered sonnet...love and light WW...^WW^
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Date: 6/11/2018 4:17:00 AM
I agree with your philosophy completely Bud, whatever you do, do it "with heart". Congratulations on POTD, so well deserved on this wonderful Sonnet....Maria :)
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Date: 6/10/2018 4:49:00 PM
what a fabulous sonnet white wolf:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/10/2018 3:37:00 PM
Simply beautiful poetry Budgie
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Date: 6/10/2018 9:33:00 AM
Great poem ... Nice sonnet ... A pleasure read ...
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Date: 6/10/2018 8:29:00 AM
Wonderful sonnet :) peace and love! xomo
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Date: 6/10/2018 7:16:00 AM
- So deep with feelings, W.W. .... emotionally sad ... lovely written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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