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Morning bed Sheets tightly tucked One pillow crumpled There once was a gal named Linda Oh the marriages she did get inta Try as they would to be as they should They never could even begin ta. Wanting a home intensely evolved into creations of delusion Life broke through, one let go, in freedom lay the solution For the Divorce Club Contest

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Date: 12/8/2010 4:11:00 PM
nice write here my friend
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Date: 12/5/2010 11:37:00 PM
enjoyed these Linda, congrats on your win. Harry
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Date: 12/3/2010 9:11:00 PM
I really liked your couplet for this one, Linda--very thought -provoking and I enjoyed your limerick & haiku too :) Congrats on you win! -- nikko :)
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Date: 12/2/2010 3:11:00 PM
Congrata Linda on your success in contest...
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Date: 12/2/2010 12:59:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, linda
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Date: 12/2/2010 9:24:00 AM
Good work on these set, enjoyed the humor and the lovely visual haiku, congrats on your win:)
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Date: 12/2/2010 7:18:00 AM
Linda) Congratulations! With your awesome 3some of 3 differ forms. I had lots of fun reading every entry. I was surprised every one pulled off a beautiful and amazing Job to my request. lol,, and the whole time I thought it was going to be a tough contest,...p.d.
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Date: 12/2/2010 6:43:00 AM
Congrats Linda on your big win in P.D.'s contest with this brilliant write and entry on divorce my friend.. enjoy your top ten victory today with luv..
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Date: 12/2/2010 6:01:00 AM
Congratulations Linda for your win in P.D.'s "Divorce Club Contest". Love, Carol
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Date: 11/30/2010 9:44:00 AM
Enjoyed your creative write for the divorce club contest,good luck and thanks for your comment.Sandra
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Date: 11/29/2010 10:37:00 PM
enjoyed your write today, and many thanks for your comment Linda
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Date: 11/29/2010 8:38:00 PM
Hey, you kind of went along same lines as I did with your haiku, Linda. I REALLY like all three of your entires here. Cool. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/28/2010 4:48:00 PM
Interesting modification of that troubled girl limerick. I can't for the life of me however remember it. I do know a winner though and I know that this one is it. No contest. One of the best. You'll rank high in this contest. *TheKidsterWasHere*
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Date: 11/28/2010 9:43:00 AM
Wanted to acknowledge the limerick is a modification from an old limerick about a girl who always got inta trouble heard long ago as a child.
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Date: 11/27/2010 2:32:00 PM
I particularly enjoyed the first two with full of wit and yet frolicsome write, linda. Good luck
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Date: 11/27/2010 11:25:00 AM
Interesting write..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner..I appreciate you stopping by and reading my work you seemed to feel the spirit in which I wrote the Haiku about the tree..Divorce is not a good thing but sometimes it happens...Sara
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Date: 11/27/2010 9:09:00 AM
This is really cool, Linda!! An excellent, witty entry for the contest and I wish you success. (Really love the way you did the limerick rhyme!) Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/27/2010 8:53:00 AM
in freedom lay the solution... yep, that did it for me too.. best of luck in the contest~~
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Date: 11/27/2010 8:11:00 AM
i like this entry. the limerick. i felt you and wanted to comfort you. John H Loving III
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Date: 11/27/2010 8:09:00 AM
Well written piece for contest my friend, best of luck
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