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Disgruntled Disarray

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In every weary word, there is a selfish storm, Within a blinding blurred of a formless form… Thoughts are lost amidst the negligent nights, Tongues are tossed upon blasphemous bites. Cloudy confusion arises from its sacrificial still, As the able abeyant advises the wandering will… The silence surrenders to the drowning deluge, For the rain remembers to release in its refuge. Where the idealized illusions come out to play, The stigmatic seclusions dormant in disarray… Whirl winding whispers decay in the distance, Amongst tangled twisters of raging resistance. Nov.19.2019 Disarray Poetry Sponsored by: Nina Parmenter N/A for contest

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Date: 11/29/2019 2:16:00 PM
A mesmerizing write, I enjoyed the journey-
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Date: 11/23/2019 6:58:00 AM
A beautifully written missive. I started to listen to it, but was expecting your voice. The lady's voice was annoying to me. Next time, is there a way for you to record it yourself?
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Date: 11/23/2019 7:38:00 AM
Your right Caren...it was annoying to me too...I've changed it...Thank you, my friend...we make a great team lol...^WW^ :o)
Date: 11/22/2019 5:08:00 AM
I'm with Maria here bro bro! Amazingly done!;)
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Date: 11/21/2019 6:10:00 AM
A hard topic to write on, but you did an amazing job my friend. Good luck on the contest....Maria Hugs
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Date: 11/20/2019 9:08:00 AM
I like how you approached the theme. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/19/2019 11:53:00 PM
Seems the perfect storm, ^WW^, in this disgruntled disarray. Time to skidaddle! Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 11/19/2019 4:18:00 PM
nice one ww...
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Date: 11/19/2019 10:00:00 AM
Well written about disarray WW! I like the ending :)
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Date: 11/19/2019 9:35:00 AM
Kind of a chaotic poetic disarray. Nicely done my friend. Best wishes in the contest.
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