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Dim Lit Night

Quiet is the Dim Lit Night Tearing Eyes cannot find sight The Quarrelling Mind gives up the fight Nothing now to make it right The road to Freedom long is paved So much Heartache along the way The Eyes into the Soul today Are blind and numb and well Betrayed Kind and Gentle the Soul longs to be Yet hopelessly Mental seems it Destiny Save this Pen it's Company Through times of Pain and Agony Quiet is the Dim Lit Night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/20/2016 1:36:00 PM
Dim lit night... Very good skat
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Chris Hagy
Date: 8/21/2016 1:39:00 PM
Thanks so much for reading skat:)...sometimes good writes come from dim nights.
Date: 4/15/2016 7:21:00 PM
It's ok. you were not the first to say you liked the original version. So much for THAT exercise in rewriting poetry. haha.
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Chris Hagy
Date: 4/16/2016 6:59:00 PM
Sometimes the first time's the charm!
Date: 4/15/2016 7:21:00 PM
And let me say how much I like THIS little poem!
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Chris Hagy
Date: 4/16/2016 6:58:00 PM
Thanks, it is certainly a mood poem...glad you liked it.

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