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Diary of a Salmon

Day 1 Today I passed a shad, on his way to Prince William Sound. He protested that I go downstream. But to the current he is bound. Day 2 I encountered a fly on the surface. But it was the ploy of a man. To eat me was his plan. My escape did him a disservice. Day 3 Today I came across a bear. By accident I entered her lair. Her approaches, she kept deploying. And her cubs were winy and annoying. Day 4 An assault from an eagle came upon me. From above, the attack I did not see. A glare threw him off by an inch. Certainly, I’m lucky to be free Day 5 Today the river was crowded, by comrades going to the same place. Because of them my passage was shrouded. And I couldn’t get them out of my face. Day 6 My journey has been long. Against the current, one must be strong. The objective of my journey may end in vain. At least, unlike others, I went against the grain.

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Date: 11/2/2017 8:46:00 PM
Enjoyed! swim on ~ john
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Date: 3/5/2016 12:47:00 PM
A very enjoyable poem, Daniel! #7 Your journey will end tomorrow with a day of rest:) Not long ago I wrote a similar one to yours, in some aspects, but very short compared to yours! ~ regards // paul
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Daniel Carter
Date: 3/5/2016 8:48:00 PM
Thanks so much for the read, Paul. And yes looking forward to the day of rest :) -Dan
Date: 2/23/2016 10:14:00 AM
Quite clever...an enjoyable piece.
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