Home » Poems » Newton Ranaweera » Dew Bubbles

Dew Bubbles

moon drowns in dew drops meadow dawns with star sapphires bees blow dew bubbles Dec. 28, 2020 Hi-Ku (4) Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: Brain Strand

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/31/2020 3:11:00 AM

Creative work for Brian's contest. Thanks for the visit to my page. I hope this is the best year up to this point in your life and may each year following be awesome. Sara

Newton Ranaweera
Date: 12/31/2020 6:59:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sara, for this impressively sweet comment!!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/28/2020 11:09:00 PM

'bees blow dew bubbles' is a line to picture, to let the imagination play with, and to ponder. Bravo, Newton! Happy New Year! :) gw

Newton Ranaweera
Date: 12/29/2020 4:15:00 AM

Thank you so much, Gershon, for this impressively beautiful comment and the wish!! Wish you a Very Happy New Year!!!