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Devoted to the ocean am I, ever since I was a small fry. Daddy taught me to swim, the first time I was in with him. Diving from the steps at the pier, the higher the dive, the louder the cheer. Few things compare to a skinny dip, running in unseen in the nip. In summer when the seawater heats, I just can't wait to bathe my feet. Even in winter when seagulls screech, it's soothing to walk along the beach. Cares and worries drift away as I walk along the bay. Blessed am I to live close by, when devoted to the ocean am I. 04/08/2019 For Chantelle Anne Cooke's contest Devoted To The Ocean

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Date: 8/16/2019 2:59:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/16/2019 12:14:00 AM
I love your beautiful entry Jean. Lovely memories. We both live on islands by the sea. Congratulations on your deserving podium win! : ) xxoo
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Date: 8/5/2019 7:17:00 AM
A charming write, Jean--sweet memories...all the best.
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Jean Murray
Date: 8/5/2019 1:48:00 PM
Hello again Vijay. Nice to see you.
Date: 8/5/2019 5:01:00 AM
- Sounds wonderful, Jean :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jean Murray
Date: 8/5/2019 5:42:00 AM
When I see your name I always smile Sunshine.
Date: 8/4/2019 7:48:00 PM
Elegantly stated, Jean. True devotion to that ocean. G.L. in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 8/5/2019 4:47:00 AM
Thank you Gershon.
Date: 8/4/2019 5:56:00 PM
this is lovely, jean! you're lucky to live where you do...
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Jean Murray
Date: 8/4/2019 6:59:00 PM
Hi Ilene. Lovely as always to see you here. Yes...as the song goes "Thank God we're surrounded by water." here in Ireland.

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