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Depths of Despair

Depths of Despair Rise it will not, is Buried deep in the kernel Of the mortal being Soul squirming to realm beyond Trail of blood inked black with grief Earlier submitted Date 26 Sept 2016 Contest Lament a Tanka Now submitting for contest 261 max 5 lines Date Jan 9 2017

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Date: 9/28/2016 4:10:00 AM
Very deep tanka... Nicely penned...
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 9/28/2016 5:39:00 AM
Thanks, Supraja!
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 9/28/2016 5:37:00 AM
Thanks, Supraja!
Date: 9/27/2016 9:24:00 PM
very nice up my ally good work ~Phatt
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 9/28/2016 5:38:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 9/27/2016 2:47:00 PM
wow, this really makes you FEEL its despairing tone. Well done!
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 9/28/2016 5:39:00 AM
Thank youAndrea!
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 9/28/2016 5:38:00 AM
Thank youAndrea!

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