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Denied Alchemy

readings denied so I scratched your name in shale alchemy of sand I am still learning how to write Haiku please be gentle lol

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/24/2014 1:47:00 PM
Layers of meaning in just a few words...love it.
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Date: 6/24/2014 1:40:00 PM
You Are Awesome Girl! ~ KLove *
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Date: 6/24/2014 11:59:00 AM
- A skilled haiku in my eyes, Jayne! - (I am thankfully (!) ... no expert :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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