Delirium

shambolic delirium these thoughts building within as the world crumbles around me like trees unstable from storms emotions building up before erupting through the hush of silence cries muffled in anguish June 5th 2020 Pick-A-Title, Vol 18 - Yalto 2 - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh 2. Delirium

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John Hamilton

Date: 6/8/2020 6:24:00 PM

A fitting write considering the times we're in eh Sandy. maybe the storm had something to do with this write, you always do so well with natural metaphors. should do well in the contest

Judy Ball

Date: 6/5/2020 4:31:00 PM

Hmmm Where is it? JB

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/5/2020 3:39:00 PM

- I can not see the poem, Sandra ???????? - Hope all is well with you ... (I am not so often on soup for the time being ) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 6/5/2020 3:54:00 PM

it was there...I don't know why it disappeared this is the second time... maybe someone doesn't like it?

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/5/2020 3:33:00 PM

A very emotional write Sandra. Hope you're well. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Sandra Adams
Date: 6/5/2020 3:54:00 PM

Thank you so much Tom :) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 6/5/2020 3:23:00 PM

Very strong and deeply written Best wishes in the contest my friend

Sandra Adams
Date: 6/5/2020 3:26:00 PM

Thank you Chris... haven't been on most the week, we had some violent storms roll through here, downed trees and powerlines everywhere... getting dark again now and I just got power back this morning so hoping it stays on... 2020 is quite the year... hugs