Delights

See what delights I bring you this day. Don't worry , I won't stay. Across this crowded forest room, I see there are many like you. The winds waft to the clouds above. The woods are bright on this day. Nymphs have come out to play. Bees are out sipping the morning dew. And you, you have no sweets, do you ? The mountain streams, they call to you. And in my breast , the serpent does lie. By the stream stand crowded trees this day. All things flourish as you turn away. Oh, how I long to pass my days with you. As the wandering forest dances away. 6/ 15/ 2013 Sat. 9 am

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Paul Callus

Date: 7/28/2014 2:38:00 AM

Hi Debbie! Excellent write and lovely imagery; a delight to read and picture in my mind. (delving into your past, while looking forward to new posts.) .......... paul

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 7/4/2013 2:30:00 PM

This is a beautiful, vivid one. I like how you implement nature and fantasy and mix it with passionate emotions. Always, Laura

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 7/3/2013 4:16:00 PM

A beautiful scene and the picture stays in my mind long after.Hugs sweet lady, SuZ

Debbie Duncan
Date: 7/3/2013 5:01:00 PM

Thank you Suzy ;}

Michael Ainsley

Date: 6/26/2013 8:32:00 AM

can't beleave I used hear instead here. Sorry.

Michael Ainsley

Date: 6/26/2013 8:28:00 AM

many levels hear......I like it.

Don Johnson

Date: 6/25/2013 1:24:00 AM

all sounds ok mate ...keep em coming babe :)

Debbie Duncan
Date: 6/26/2013 12:13:00 PM

Thank you Don ;}

Kate Wilderson

Date: 6/23/2013 6:28:00 AM

Amazing...I really enjoyed your poems tonight. Thanks for sharing them! :) -Kate

Adarsh Raj

Date: 6/22/2013 10:07:00 AM

You inspire me, your poems sure touch the heart, ma'am......:):):)

Debbie Duncan
Date: 6/22/2013 6:45:00 PM

I thank you ;}

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 6/21/2013 2:15:00 PM

Debbie your poem as a wonderful vibrancy. I admire your creativity. Warm Smiles, Connie

Debbie Duncan
Date: 6/21/2013 5:00:00 PM

thank you Connie ;}

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/20/2013 6:10:00 PM

Ahhh!!Enjoyed reading this one today..I am glad that I chose it to read..Thanks for the visit to my work and taking time to comment..Your comments are always encouraging..Sara

Austin Tenthani Phiri

Date: 6/19/2013 11:16:00 AM

mmmh...savoury sweet poem Debbie

Debbie Duncan
Date: 6/21/2013 12:22:00 AM

Thank you ;}

Shiraz Iqbal

Date: 6/17/2013 10:58:00 PM

How I long to pass my days with you............ This touches me in many ways Lovely piece of work. Keep Writing Shiraz

Debbie Duncan
Date: 6/18/2013 1:40:00 AM

I thank you ;}

Karen Anglesey

Date: 6/17/2013 8:17:00 PM

Love your whimsical quality, flow and imagery. Last line is my favorite :)

Debbie Duncan
Date: 6/17/2013 8:49:00 PM

Thank you Karen ;}

Richard D Seal

Date: 6/17/2013 10:54:00 AM

Really lovely Debbie, you brought the forest alive with this one. Take care, Richard

Debbie Duncan
Date: 6/17/2013 5:27:00 PM

Thank you Richard ;}

Poet Tacito

Date: 6/16/2013 2:49:00 PM

Is the last line "wondering" or "wandering"? Either way, this piece hit quite hard. Strong ending.

Debbie Duncan
Date: 6/16/2013 4:50:00 PM

glad you like it Drake, yes wandering is better then wondering, even though you say either way is good ;}

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/16/2013 11:59:00 AM

debbie, I too am awaiting that mini series, under the dome. There are SO many great shows on tv these days, I can hardly keep up with them. And READ a NOVEL? I don't even have time for it anymore. haha

Debbie Duncan
Date: 6/16/2013 1:41:00 PM

I know So many good shows for summer ;}

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/15/2013 2:21:00 PM

what a cool poem. And the title fits it so well because it has such a delightful ring to it.

Debbie Duncan
Date: 6/16/2013 2:33:00 AM

Thank you Andrea ;}

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/15/2013 1:30:00 PM

I danced through this one, my dear...except for the serpent bit! yea...I'm a scardy cat! Lovely way how you brought nature alive, Debbie! Great write!

Debbie Duncan
Date: 6/15/2013 9:12:00 PM

Thank you Eileen ;}

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/15/2013 12:36:00 PM

- An idyllic feeling in your beautiful forest. - Lovely, Debbie! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan
Date: 6/15/2013 8:44:00 PM

Thank you Anne- Lise ;}