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Deep Sleeped

deep is the sleeper wakes not for rushing water chronic bed wetter For contest senryu -topic On human foibles: Definition, flaws in human behaviour/character. date 7-9-18

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Susan Gentry

Date: 8/6/2018 4:37:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! :)

Eve Roper

Date: 8/5/2018 2:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Mark Toney

Date: 8/4/2018 2:51:00 PM

Yikes! Congratulations on your win, Casarah :)

Paris-Maree Boreham

Date: 8/4/2018 12:48:00 AM

Hello Casarah, Congratulations !!

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/3/2018 10:47:00 PM

Not fun. Congrats on your winning senryu, Casarah.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/3/2018 3:11:00 PM

good to see this one again!! Congrats.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/3/2018 1:25:00 PM

Lol! Too true. I mean, really, too true ;) Congrats on your win! xomo

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/10/2018 1:04:00 PM

This is good one, Casarah! Janice

Lyric Man

Date: 7/9/2018 7:36:00 PM

This is comic genius, Cas!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/9/2018 6:29:00 PM

oh my, I am glad this never happened to me. I have actually dreamed I was urinating and I still managed not to do it in reality!!! Loved this.

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/9/2018 3:13:00 PM

Something very few admit to but most do at some point in their life. A distasteful subject, tastefully written, Cas:)

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/9/2018 2:52:00 PM

It feels so warm and nice...then oh oh...Nice one Casarah...All the best

Fj Thomas

Date: 7/9/2018 1:56:00 PM

Very true Cas. And the first time I've ever read a poem on something that has affected so many people so commonly.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/9/2018 9:54:00 AM

made me smile Cas!:-) hugs jan xx

Silent One

Date: 7/9/2018 8:55:00 AM

True..

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/9/2018 8:55:00 AM

This is such a profound truth!