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December Magic

speckling dark green pines gifting the dark diamonds white moonlit snowflakes lay soft fabric for children's play and knitted clouds on the roofs 26~12~2014 Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich Contest Name: A Quintain Christmas

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Daver Austin

Date: 1/10/2015 10:10:00 AM

Colorful tanka. I like the way you bring the children into your poem. Kids can enjoy winter - wish I could. Love, daver

Roy Jerden

Date: 1/7/2015 8:20:00 AM

Awesome images, Maurice! Congratulations!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 1/5/2015 5:21:00 AM

stunning imagery Maurice congrats hugs

John Lawless

Date: 1/4/2015 9:53:00 PM

AH, Maurice, that last line....those "knitted clouds on the roofs"...congrats

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/4/2015 7:18:00 PM

ahh knitted cloud YES I true! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/4/2015 5:35:00 PM

Hi Maurice,, Congratulations on your win. Luv ~LINDA~

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/4/2015 5:18:00 PM

"and knitted clouds on the roofs"......oh my, l love that last line especially !! Congratulations to you, Maurice, on this lovely Quintain !

Jan Allison

Date: 1/4/2015 3:53:00 PM

I knew this would place high my friend - congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 1/4/2015 3:36:00 PM

congratulations Maurice on this fine win

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/4/2015 3:06:00 PM

Maurice, congratulations on your win! Wonderful, unexpected imagery! Sandra

Paul Callus

Date: 1/4/2015 2:53:00 PM

A 7 for this enchanting beauty, Armand; love the knitted clouds. Congratulations on a deserved big win. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2015 2:24:00 PM

The imagery of fabric and knitted clouds were so imaginative, Armand. Maybe one of the most original ones for imagery. Congrats for your second place.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 12/30/2014 12:03:00 AM

A magical winter scene, Maurice! Makes me long for something I can't have...snow. I hope you're enjoying a white winter with moonlit snowflakes.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/29/2014 8:32:00 AM

Go Maurice very charming! Light & Love & Happy New Year

Seren Roberts

Date: 12/28/2014 9:00:00 PM

felt like sitting down and painting the picture your poem has put in my head.....wonderful .....Seren

Kelly Deschler

Date: 12/28/2014 12:54:00 AM

The imagery that you've painted here is so beautiful, Maurice. I could feel the refreshing chill of the winter air as I read your words... Lovely work! Good luck in Andrea's contest!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/27/2014 3:36:00 PM

Lovely Maurice!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/27/2014 12:08:00 PM

Great poetic quality..I enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/27/2014 11:27:00 AM

"moonlit snowflakes""fabric for children's play"--wonderful December magic Maurice.Love. Wish you and your family a very happy 2015>>>>rajat

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 12/26/2014 11:12:00 PM

Magical piece, Maurice! The imagery is outstanding; the flow is flawless, and beauty is captivating! Best wishes. Pandita.

Casarah Nance

Date: 12/26/2014 8:56:00 PM

Oh I love that-knits veiled clouds upon the roofs! very descriptive and enchanting ;)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/26/2014 5:47:00 PM

beautiful! Do you have snow Maurice? We pretty much had it all melt away with the rain.

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 12/26/2014 5:56:00 PM

Here too, it all melted Arthur.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/26/2014 11:15:00 AM

stunning imagery I LOVE it - I think this will do well with Andrea! Hugs jan xxx