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Death Versus Vanity - Collab

The gold carriage awaits to seat my soul, As I rise, I see what used to be whole, My cold corpse lies in state like a closed shell, Is it really me? How can one tell? Who dressed me in that awful beige attire? No wonder I can't float any higher, Oh! Well, the carriage will just have to wait, I'm not leaving my corpse in that grim state Date: 29/03/23 Sponsor: Joanna Daniel Collaborate with me Contest Howmanysyllables.com: 10 syllables per line Rhyme Form aa/bb Rhymezone

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Date: 3/29/2023 9:20:00 PM
Hahahaha! This is great! Love the humor and subject matter. Awesome :)
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W J Clarke
Date: 3/30/2023 7:22:00 AM
Thank you Julie. Nice to get a compliment from a Laureate of charm and humour :-)

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