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*2 Corinthians 5:8, King James Version: "We are confident, I say, 

and willing to be absent from the body and to be present with the

Lord."

**Paul says in 1 Corinthians 13:12, "For now we see in a mirror,

dimly, but then face to face. Now I know in part, but then I shall

know just as I also am known" (New King James Version). This

verse indicates that we shall know others as well as be known by

others.

 

For Mama Your voice, your face, your love for me exist still in my heart and mind. Though you've been gone for many years, your essence isn't hard to find. I hear expressions you once used; you speak your truths to me once more. I see you in my siblings' eyes and feel you to my very core. The part of you that didn't die when sickness claimed your shell of clay, the living soul God gave to you, is with your Savior safe today. When I have taken my last breath, my soul will be in Heaven too.* We’ll know each other upon sight!** Till then life’s troubles will ensue. We share our lovely memories of believers we have sadly lost; but as they dwell with the Divine, we are by life still tempest tossed. April 1, 2023 Death of a Loved One Poetry Contest Sponsor: Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 4/2/2023 1:46:00 PM
A lovely piece with a deep faith in God goodness It a testimony of life journey and the worth to stay in the lord presence. Lovely.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/3/2023 7:52:00 AM
Weston, thank you for this lovely response! Janice
Date: 4/1/2023 11:56:00 AM
This is very comforting poem, Janice. Excellent by any standard. Hoping you are well:)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/3/2023 7:51:00 AM
Thanks so much, Danny. I am doing well~~hope you are too! Janice

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