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Death of a Free Diver

Death greets those who dive too deep in dark pelagic hell; tossed from jagged rock to vicious coral, she stays the corpse’s dance, each impact destroys a little more; her slow explosion attracting hungry fish All see her, bar gossiping annemones, Cinderellas of the midnight tide, swaying like mops In the angry swell Now, amid the canyons of the blue- green sea, blood’s torpid rivers conspire with current to pull her down; where grassy queue awaits volcanic vents; the tube-worms larder door

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/5/2015 11:13:00 PM
Nice write. I enjoyed reading!!! Brought back memories of me diving into the neighborhood pool and going straight to the bottom head first, ouch!!!
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Date: 8/5/2015 7:30:00 PM
So expressive and different. Although, I would never be a diver, I have read books, one Shadow Diver and your poem is so creative.
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