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Death Knell Tanka

a limp flag hangs at half-mast the silence broken by the church bell and village gossiper ------------------------- A Brian Strand Contest Placed 1st June 2021

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Indiana Shaw

Date: 8/15/2021 7:50:00 AM

An intriguing little write, darning the gossiper . . .

Paul Callus
Date: 8/18/2021 2:44:00 AM

Thank you, I.S. People do not like gossipers, but they like to hear the gossip!! ~ Regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/14/2021 8:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your fine win in this contest Paul - the village gossiper and the town crier one and the same person me thinks. Warm regards, hugs and blessings. Jennifer.

Paul Callus
Date: 8/18/2021 2:47:00 AM

Hi Jenny :) I enjoy reading your feedback :) I have not been around much..lots of catching up to do. ~ Warm regards & hugs & blessings to you, too // paul

Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/7/2021 11:03:00 PM

You are a master at writing these! Simply amazing... Pangie

Paul Callus
Date: 8/18/2021 2:45:00 AM

Thank you Pangie. Hope you're keeping well :) Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2021 10:58:00 AM

this is really great. It makes you wonder what that gossip was about and how it could have related to the theme of the tanka! congrats on the win.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/22/2021 7:53:00 AM

I'm pleased I got you wondering about the gossiper, Andrea :) Thank you for stopping by with congrats and a 'big' like. Warm regards // paul

Carol Louise Moon

Date: 6/10/2021 8:03:00 PM

Paul, congratulations for your win in Brian's contest for this well-crafted tanka. And what a zinger of a last line. Wow! Carol Louise

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2021 11:21:00 AM

Thank you Carol; I love your sincere reaction and lovely comments. ~ Warm regards // paul

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/10/2021 12:49:00 AM

Beautiful. Congratulations!

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2021 11:10:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed C.A. Thank you. Regards // paul

Angela Crabtree

Date: 6/7/2021 3:07:00 PM

Perfect title or a perfect poem. Seems the flags are flown a lot at half-mast these days. Hope you have a wonderful week, Paul :)

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2021 11:10:00 AM

Thank you Angela. Hope you have a lovely weekend! Regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/7/2021 7:20:00 AM

You told a succinct story in so few words. That is a rare talent. Bravo and congrats on a fine win.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2021 11:37:00 AM

Your comments are truly appreciated, Richard. Thank you. Regards // paul

Jack Horne

Date: 6/4/2021 1:41:00 PM

love this clever one, Paul - hope you are well, my friend

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2021 12:00:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed it, My friend. I'm keeping as well as can be :) hope you are, too. Regards // paul

Judy Ball

Date: 6/4/2021 8:44:00 AM

Well done Paul. Congrats on a well deserved win. God Bless, JB

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2021 11:56:00 AM

Thank you Judy. Regards and blessings ... and enjoy the weekend :) // paul

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/3/2021 7:24:00 AM

Congrats, dear. You deserve 1rst place for this beauty. I didn't expect that last line, which makes it all that more memorable.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/4/2021 11:01:00 AM

Thank you so much dear Eileen. I traded 1st place for a n/a :) I just read your latest emotional poem, but there must be a glitch because my comment won't go through. I'll try again later. Hugs // paul

Quoth Theraven

Date: 6/3/2021 7:15:00 AM

Paul, The end of a Town Crier in Tanka. Safer to be a tax collector of Rome these days. -Richard

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2021 11:08:00 AM

Thank you Richard. Your comments made me smile and knowingly nod my head :) Stay safe // paul

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/2/2021 2:17:00 AM

You have described it so aptly, Paul, should place high:)

Paul Callus
Date: 6/10/2021 9:58:00 AM

I appreciate your show of faith, JO :) Thank you! Best regards // paul

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/1/2021 7:52:00 PM

When a flag hangs at half-mast, there is a moment of silence, out of respect. It is sad indeed, when someone whispers (gossips) during such a moment. Your words touch my heart deeply. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy

Paul Callus
Date: 6/10/2021 9:57:00 AM

Thank you, Brandy; always a pleasure to receive your visits and feedback. Blessings & Hugs // paul

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/1/2021 4:53:00 PM

Yeah ~ where would we be without the gossipers who have no respect for anything ! Awesome poem, Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/10/2021 9:38:00 AM

Thank you for for liking and commenting, Line. ~ Best regards // paul