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Dear Lord

Dear Lord, I come to you with a special need Please keep me humble as I succeed My Lord within the breath of this prayer For all those in need I offer care The elderly call me when in need Lord, forever help me plant thy seed I pray dear Lord to never forget The things in my life that I regret Let me use those things so I can be Forever serving you humbly

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/28/2010 6:22:00 AM

Very uplifting, Mr. Jordan.Now I see why U are a Favorite on the soup. You sure are going down as 1 of my favorites. This has been an honor to read. I also want to thank U for the nice and positive comments you always return. I am so glad U found your way to God, I am still searching. I may say U are a very inspiring man for never looking down on us poets. I do recall the comment on my Joker poem. You have traveled down the same road many are lost in. Thank U for your encouraging comments,p.d.

L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/17/2009 7:29:00 AM

The Dante, Shakespeare, Byron, and all else had a driving passion ... a consuming past, and God choosing you did not only lay his prayers on your breast, but gave you the past as fiery test ... and from where I write ... you are every mettle of man, worthy of the holy flame, and this poem proves it again.

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/7/2009 5:54:00 AM

A beautifu prayer to our Lord, Michael! Congratulations on your well-deserved win in Brian's "My Dear...." Contest! Peace and love, Audrey

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/2/2009 8:19:00 PM

This is such a beautiful prayer, MJ--congratulations on your win!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 12/1/2009 6:42:00 PM

Congratulations Michael on your uplifting poem and on your win. Love, Joyce

Raul Moreno

Date: 11/30/2009 9:54:00 PM

MJ, congrats on your success in Brian's contest...Raul

Date: 11/28/2009 4:20:00 PM

What a wonderful prayer/poem. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. Keep up the good writing! Karen

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/27/2009 11:20:00 AM

Congratulations, on your honorable mention in Brian’s “My Dear” writing contest with this spiritual letter. It's easy to see why you won. Your creativity enlivens the mind. Smiles, DAS-J

Donna Golden

Date: 11/26/2009 9:22:00 AM

Beautiful prayer, Michael! Each day we must remind ourselves that our strength and power come from Him...lest we come to think that we no longer need Him! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Hugs, Donna

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/26/2009 8:05:00 AM

Congrats, Michael, on your winning poem in Brian's contest... well deserved win indeed.. blessings ... luv... on thankxxxgiving day.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Elaine George

Date: 11/26/2009 7:37:00 AM

Hi Michael, Congrautations on your win in Brian's contest. This is a beautiful prayer that I shall put on my Favorite list. Love, Lainie

Brian Strand

Date: 11/26/2009 1:05:00 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest Michael.Rgds Brian.My latest contest LOVE CAME DOWN is now open.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/24/2009 11:22:00 PM

This poem shows that you are living your prayers. Very nice Michael. Thank you for your comments. I appreciate them very much. Love, Joyce

Tallan Bent

Date: 11/24/2009 2:32:00 AM

Many the lords ears be awake to your call, Hope everything OK within your day to day life, All the Best Tallan

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 11/23/2009 9:45:00 PM

Amen, Michael. I grew up in an Atheist country where religion was totally discouranged. And those guilty of this "crime" were executed on Christmas day 1998. Coincidence? Happy Thanksgiving to you and your loved ones. Love, Iolanda

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/23/2009 3:52:00 AM

Amen. Thanks for helping with my morning prayer. Very nicely done, Michael. -Robert

Brian Strand

Date: 11/22/2009 11:46:00 PM

Thank you for supporting my contest Rgds Brian

Raul Moreno

Date: 11/22/2009 10:21:00 PM

Beautiful Michael, the conclusion was excellent...Raul