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Days of Summer Love

Do you remember our sun-tanned limbs set free on heated sand, tumbling bare through steamy air? Our fanciful flights expressed, replied from tree tops in dreams. Languishing winds still call me there. Palm trees heavy with coconuts swayed while we splashed flirtatiously in shimmering jade sea. Admiring sunlight surfing effortlessly, we never thought of Fall's chill in Summer’s glee. June reminds of a vine-ripe henna sunrise sweetened in youth’s glow to whimsical wisps of sun flashing pink pleats in last dance as blue flies away. Oh, how we shined on blithe breeze in love! Look faraway to forgotten horizons on splendid pastel painted canvas of sun’s light passed by. Think of me in younger days gone and reminisce of bliss as lives carry on. Written 7/3/20 Contest - Summer Love Sponsor - Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 7/7/2020 8:19:00 AM
This muse of yours is such a blissful journey Rhonda. I could feel myself basking in soothing sunlight near palm trees. Congratulations on your win for such a dreamy melody. Much love :)
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/12/2020 5:45:00 PM
Thank you again for all of your support, Aditi! You are a blessing. Rhonda xx
Date: 7/5/2020 12:18:00 AM
Back to congratulate you ~ well done!
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/6/2020 9:18:00 PM
Thanks for coming back to congratulate me, John! :) Rhonda xx
Date: 7/4/2020 4:16:00 PM
This is gorgeous Rhonda and so deserving of First Place. The colors used adds to the romance and beauty expressed. Congratulations on your wonderful First Place win! Happy 4th of July! Blessings xxoo
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/6/2020 9:17:00 PM
Thank you, Connie! I hope you had a wonderful holiday weekend. Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 7/4/2020 3:59:00 PM
Congrats on your top win!:)
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/6/2020 9:16:00 PM
Thank you, Brenda! Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 7/4/2020 10:22:00 AM
OOOH how romantic and such lovely, sensual imagery.... The second stanza has such vivid imagery..
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Date: 7/3/2020 11:50:00 PM
A beautiful reminiscence of past summers gone, Rhonda, well penned:)
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/6/2020 9:16:00 PM
Thank you for the kind visit, Jo! Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 7/3/2020 10:09:00 PM
Chantelle, this is exquisitely penned. Your imagery dynamic.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/6/2020 9:15:00 PM
Thank you, Caren! Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 7/3/2020 6:42:00 PM
Enjoying your alliterative word pairings: fanciful flights, sunlight surfing, whimsical wisps, and blithe breeze. This is a very pleasant stroll down the memory lane of long gone teenage summers. Reminisce of bliss indeed! Best wishes for your contest, Rhonda ~ John
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/6/2020 9:15:00 PM
Thank you, John! I always liked the rispetto form. Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 7/3/2020 4:15:00 PM
- Beautiful ... as always, I really enjoy this writing, Rhonda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/6/2020 9:14:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! Hugs to you, Rhonda xx
Date: 7/3/2020 3:57:00 PM
Enjoyed these tender memories of love, Rhonda. Your poems flow so gracefully and delight the reader. So well written, as always! A definite FAVE for me.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/6/2020 9:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay. I'm grateful and honored for the fave! Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 7/3/2020 2:09:00 PM
Lovely penning Rhonda, showing great imagery and images of the summer ?? sun.Having reminded today as it's poured rain all day. Blessings,Gordon
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/6/2020 9:12:00 PM
Thanks, Gordon. I hope the weather has improved for you. Blessings, Rhonda xx

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