Days

There are days when... Solace is in solitude Reminisce in stillness Renews an attitude There are days when... Silent scream at silhouette Thoughts left unsaid Clears a conscience of regret There are days when... People perceived problems Pray for strength Do my part to solve them There are days when... I wake up next to you Live a blessed life Back to you when day is through August 24, 2018

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Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 1/16/2019 10:56:00 AM

Thoughtful musing by one well connected with the Muse. Nice one Susan.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 9/10/2018 10:29:00 PM

Very Nice! well written

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/5/2018 8:40:00 PM

I don't remember any days when you woke up beside me? I guarantee you I'd remember that! Lovely poem, Susan:)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/30/2018 3:39:00 PM

Hello Susan Gentry, I lkie this poem. I also felt this poem to be a romantic one. Although it is a rhyme. Have a nice evening my friend.

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/30/2018 7:31:00 PM

Thank you, Darlene.

Charles Messina

Date: 8/30/2018 1:24:00 PM

A genuine write, Susan... Yes, there are days when... Enjoyed the read! ~Charlie

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/30/2018 7:30:00 PM

Thanks, Charlie.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/26/2018 3:44:00 PM

I love how you concluded this one so sweetly. Very nice poem, Susan

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/27/2018 4:12:00 PM

Thank you.

Carole Duet

Date: 8/26/2018 1:35:00 AM

Lovely poem, Susan. Good luck in the contest.

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/26/2018 4:25:00 AM

Thanks, Carole.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/26/2018 1:27:00 AM

Good composition. I liked. All the best.

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/26/2018 4:25:00 AM

Thank you.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 8/25/2018 8:47:00 PM

I like the impact your form makes and the contents are spot on. I enjoyed this very much. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/26/2018 1:26:00 AM

Thanks, CayCay. I appreciate your input. :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/25/2018 9:17:00 AM

It is good to have your person.

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/26/2018 1:25:00 AM

Thanks Richard.

Arturo Michael

Date: 8/24/2018 9:41:00 PM

These are the day I will keep loving you, no matter what life says or do...Nice write Susan...I like the feeling of the read...All the best Susan...Nice weekend to you...

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/26/2018 1:24:00 AM

Thank you, Arturo. Glad you enjoyed. Same to you.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/24/2018 8:41:00 PM

There are days when ? we need to withdraw and grieve. Thank you for your kind comment and condolence. I deeply appreciate the gesture Susan. Love and Hugs. xo

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/26/2018 1:23:00 AM

Thanks, Pixie. Take care. Love and hugs to you too.

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/24/2018 3:47:00 PM

Great one for the contest Susan. I hope it is a winner :)

Susan Gentry
Date: 8/26/2018 1:22:00 AM

Thank you.