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Day Light

The Brightness in her eyes to my "suprise" brought out the Day Light. Her walk was straight, her smile was bright, just like the Day Light. She greeted people gracefully with such compassion and Love. Her composure was not Dark it was just like the Day Light. Both Day and Night, even when she was not in sight, you visioned her just like the Day Light.

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Date: 1/27/2016 12:44:00 PM
Nice piece. wonderfully composed. Always be flooded with Day Light. Best Wishes Cathy. Anisha D
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Cathy Holmes
Date: 1/27/2016 1:37:00 PM
Thank you Anisha
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Cathy Holmes
Date: 1/27/2016 1:27:00 PM
Thank you Anisha
Date: 1/27/2016 5:53:00 AM
The poem itself is a manifestation of daylight where we all can derive strength.
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Cathy Holmes
Date: 1/27/2016 8:13:00 AM
You understood what I tried to capture thanks so much!
Date: 1/26/2016 5:58:00 PM
Very well written Cathi
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Date: 1/26/2016 2:23:00 PM
thank you for sharing
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Cathy Holmes
Date: 1/27/2016 8:14:00 AM
Thanks so much
Date: 1/26/2016 12:08:00 PM
Very deep poem, seems rather sad actually. Well written nonetheless. Congrats on your success. Look forward to reading more. Keep writing.
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Cathy Holmes
Date: 1/27/2016 8:42:00 AM
Thanks for the encouragement!
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Cathy Holmes
Date: 1/27/2016 8:14:00 AM
Thanks for the encouragement!
Date: 5/19/2010 4:51:00 PM
Interesting thoughts for the reader to think about. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Karen
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Cathy Holmes
Date: 1/27/2016 8:15:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 5/18/2010 11:41:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 5/17/2010 5:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Cathy. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/16/2010 1:57:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL WRITE, BIG CONGRATS ON YOUR FEATURE ON THE FRONT PAGE, HOPE YOU GET A CHANCE TO STOP BY AND CHECK OUT MY BLOG, S.K.A.T.
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