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Dawn Whispers

Under a quilt of tule fog, dawn whispers don’t let go. Two cells merge one straight, one curved, forming anew. The egg of life, containing all the knowledge of the Universe. You and I now, mixed together forever, like sugar and salt. Me and you all mixed up. An original master-piece, with a new agenda. Under a Quilt of tule Fog, dawn whispers…

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Date: 9/22/2015 8:45:00 PM
If you could get this read, all the prose writers would love it. I am not a big fan of free verse, but I've read enough to know this is a winner ... very deep ... CayCay
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Stephen Barry
Date: 9/22/2015 9:34:00 PM
I've read this poem many times in several different venues. Peace CayCay

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