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Darkness Hidden shadows Keeping all their secrets Out of reach from my prying eyes If only for a moment I could see Revealing mysteries that hide I might learn of myself Alone in the Darkness

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Fj Thomas

Date: 12/2/2020 6:27:00 PM

A rictameter ...Rick? lol How have you been? :)

Jc Hawkens

Date: 3/29/2020 6:49:00 AM

Beautifully scribed. I Loved how you wrote this. Thank you JC Hawkens

Morris Murenzi

Date: 3/27/2020 11:35:00 AM

"I might learn of myself Alone in the darkness" The title it's self caught my attention because it's my area of ideas but the finish line is another flag that few will understand. Loving it. Thanks for your mind. Poems @Imirishyoart.blogspot.com visit.

Lifes' Tapestry

Date: 10/29/2018 5:59:00 AM

Ohh wow, i like that.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/20/2018 6:57:00 PM

Hello White Wolf, anyone in the dark will learn.Have a nice evening my friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/12/2018 7:28:00 AM

So great! Love the accompaniment of the Wolf.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 8/31/2018 4:43:00 AM

Quite profound, definitely food for thought and a feeling that's hard to shake, in short - very well done. All the best ... CayCay

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/30/2018 2:42:00 AM

Fits your style, WW, nicely penned:)

Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/27/2018 10:27:00 PM

Felt the dark dense in deep sense. I admire.

Silent One

Date: 8/27/2018 10:17:00 AM

If only... Dark and deep Rictameter...

Constance La France

Date: 8/25/2018 11:41:00 AM

WW, a great example for your contest, and a really great write too, the darkness holds a lot of secrets and sorrows hidden ~

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/25/2018 7:25:00 AM

Haunting and self searching all at once. Great!

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/24/2018 8:10:00 PM

A deep and lonely poem White Wolf of longing to find light in dark emotional shadows.. a piece that causes me to linger with your words. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan