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Wordsworth wrote, in 'Splendor in the Grass,' about the glory that can be found in the flower. He alluded to a love that had long since passed, like clock hands tick off each second and hour. He was saddened when taken from his sight, was the radiance of a great love he once knew. His world had been filled with splendid light, but then darkened in shades of gray and blue. He wrote to tell readers they should not grieve, for a love that has been lost or left behind. But that poet's words I am unable to believe, for I consider them callous, no truth do I find. I wonder if Wordsworth had ever shed a tear, or had his heart broken or hardened to stone. Did he ever lose a love that he once held dear? And in his hour of pitiable grief, did he cry alone? Wordsworth may have been a bard, a poet grand, but in his 'Splendor...' quote, he has clearly shown the falsehood written with ink quill in his hand, for I have grieved for lost loves... I have cried alone.

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Date: 4/15/2024 4:03:00 AM
Only someone with a hard heart would not grieve for a love lost Lin. I think many of us have suffered heartache over the years. Tom. Heading off for the beach now. Hope your week is going well. Tom
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Date: 4/15/2024 6:17:00 AM
Thank you, Tom. I'm fine and have a fun day at the beach!
Date: 4/15/2024 1:17:00 AM
This one really resonated with me Lin!
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Date: 4/15/2024 6:17:00 AM
Hi Art and thank you very much.
Date: 4/14/2024 5:27:00 PM
your poem spoke to me, Lin. "Splendor in the Grass," is beautiful but I always questioned his belief of not grieving when a love is lost or left behind. You've questioned him in a deep manner. The last verse brought small tears to me eyes, for I know the deep grief of which you spoke, and have cried alone--HARD! Outstanding poem, Lin. Have a great evening, hugs, Sara
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Date: 4/14/2024 5:35:00 PM
Hi, Sara. You always comprehend my poetry with the emotions I've tried to portray because you've grieved over the same losses in your life. Many of us have, and putting some of the suffering into words sometimes soothes the pain, but it never vanquishes it. Thank you for your thoughts and hugs. They are always returned in kind to you.

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