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For first line prompt contest using triolet form

The lightning, it was over-bright; My eyes could not filter the glare... Dark horrors exposed in the light. The lightning, it was over-bright- Hovering in and out of sight- Too dreadful to be a nightmare! The lightning, it was over-bright; My eyes could not filter the glare.

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Date: 6/25/2016 1:15:00 AM
Title seems a little too strong, " lightning Dance" is more appropriate, ....
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 6/26/2016 7:16:00 PM
The nature of the form, I guess. Thanks for commenting.

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