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Dark City

In this one big city Where the lights are always on, The people lower their heads With the burden which they were born. The lights, they always sparkle With a promise it never keeps, Tormenting the souls around them Preventing them from sleep. In this one great city Where the traffic doesn't cease, And tired souls trudge endlessly Through dark and empty streets. Dark and empty streets That lead you down to hell, A demise of soul and sentiment Discarding an empty shell. In this one dark city Where clouds gather in wait, To spill their murky load On those awaiting their fate. Some struggle through And make of it what they can, Others are easily defeated With no survival plan. In this one decietful city Nothing is as it seems, Where fantasy is reality; Consciousness is dreams. There is no distinction; It all merges into one. And no one would give a damn If the moon became the sun. In one impulsive city Where everyone gets high; A relief from the monotony, Or the fact we're going to die. Obliteration and disaster Is what we have created, Money, greed and religion Somehow lead to hatred. This is London city So beware to those that come, Bewitched by all the prospects When really there are none.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/10/2010 6:23:00 AM
this is a good poem and right up my alley i dont live in london i live in cincinnati.anyways it was really good and reminds me of my very favorite line in the beginning of watchmen. "the streets are extended gutters, they run thick with blood, and when the drains scab over the vermon will drown" then goes on to say that the politicians and whores will cry out for him to save them and he will whisper "no" it's a great movie to get inspiration for poetry. anyway good write.
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Date: 11/20/2009 2:28:00 AM
good and descriptive!cheers!
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Date: 11/20/2009 2:24:00 AM
good and descriptive!cheers!
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Date: 7/30/2009 10:46:00 AM
Wonderful poem Charlotte, another lovely read>>James
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