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Dark Anxious Whispers

should joy or gratitude I find and dance with them in dreams of bliss dark anxious whispers will remind that dangers lurk in hiddenness 12/29/2018 "Fear is a slinking cat I find beneath the lilacs of my mind." - Sophie Tunnell

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Michael Wise

Date: 1/2/2019 3:53:00 PM

Ahh, the endless struggle between darkness and light! Sure makes life interesting! Well done! :)

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/2/2019 4:00:00 PM

thx Michael :)

Gary Smith

Date: 1/1/2019 5:36:00 PM

Short and sweet and much enjoyed. :)

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/1/2019 5:53:00 PM

thank you so much! :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 12/31/2018 2:11:00 PM

The thin line between joy and turmoil, gracefully executed!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 12/31/2018 4:38:00 PM

Thank you, Michelle for stopping by and for your kind words :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/30/2018 6:50:00 PM

I love these kind of poems. Short with a potent punch. Shades of Emily Dickinson's style, methinks. A FAVE! Best wishes, Gershon

P.S. Awtry
Date: 12/31/2018 8:57:00 AM

Thank you Gershon! So glad you liked it! :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/30/2018 12:41:00 PM

"dangers lurk in hiddenness" - this is something the people who are doing mean things are counting on. It resonated with me. Bring it into the light, and it shall be dissolved I think.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 12/30/2018 1:32:00 PM

Thank you, Caren :)