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Dangerous Thoughts

Aching with desire my thoughts are filled with you thoughts I should not dare to think for fear they will destroy me. Just a thought of you and I am seized by feelings that shatter me and thrill me burning my flesh as they rush through me leaving me thirsting in their wake thirst only to be quenched with the knowledge of you thoughts that twist and taunt me until I am at the brink trembling to my very core intoxicated by this sweet torture my body silently crying out for yours begging for release relief begging you to come to me and let me wrap myself around you and lose myself to you as you lose yourself in me. Nothing else can untangle me nothing less will satisfy this aching need as I am lost to thoughts so dangerous so delicious. written 2005

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/19/2009 11:49:00 PM
I enjoyed and felt the pain of this one, good write Johnathon
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Date: 2/8/2009 6:05:00 PM
Wow Robin! How passionate! This leaves my heart beat quickened... how wonderful!
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Date: 1/31/2009 12:21:00 PM
Wow your on fire with passion I loved your energy in this piece wooo woooow I pray for the man that holds you near you may just set him on fire! Lololo just kidding great write! Laura :)
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Date: 1/31/2009 5:04:00 AM
This is so hot, just to feel this much passion for another, wow....please share your secret....I had to keep wiping the steam from my glasses....loved this write, always, Christy
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Date: 1/31/2009 3:11:00 AM
lo at Sharon's comment, no kidding, wheaties on speed, or something! lol man, hot stuff girl, hot stuff! what will be next, I wonder? love, K
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Date: 1/30/2009 4:07:00 PM
Great poem Robin, I loved the lines " thirst only to be quenched with the knowledge of you " Keep up the good work...Raul
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Date: 1/30/2009 2:15:00 PM
So Robin, just what exactly have you been eating for breakfast lately? : ) Whew, your poems are so passionate! Any secret ingredients you're willing to share? ~lol~ Steamy write! Love, Shar
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Date: 1/30/2009 12:15:00 PM
thats what they call falling in love. who knows if things don't work out you may become a stalker. lol who knows? but you have captured that emotion that we all suffer and enjoy. well done. jhl
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Date: 1/30/2009 10:20:00 AM
wow so much feeling...I like the words "Dangerous thoughts"....sometimes it is delicious yet dangerous, how true..liked it lotz* love*/*/*Maryam
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Date: 1/30/2009 8:42:00 AM
Whew! ...tastefully yet hotly passionate. Well done Robin! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 1/30/2009 7:38:00 AM
You touch the humn soul with your pen Robin.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 1/30/2009 6:42:00 AM
How could any man refuse an offer like this?? Wow, Robin....!! Goodness girl! :) Carrie
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Date: 1/30/2009 6:22:00 AM
Hi Robin, I have been away for a bit and it's so nice to be back. I loved this, thought it was really passionate and beautiful, I have been there with those "dangerous and delicious" thoughts, you captured it excellently! Blessings, Amy :)
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Date: 1/30/2009 6:11:00 AM
The voice in this piece speaks with such determination and hunger. Thoughts can be dangerous..they can also be exciting. Good job.
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Date: 1/30/2009 5:29:00 AM
Robin, this write is one that I feel many can relate to. Whether it be true or not, it is certain people that can truly unwrap another. Sometimes yes, thoughts can be dangerous, but they can be so much fun too. A very passionate and well written piece. Michael
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