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Dancing Silhouettes

Dancing Silhouettes Our silhouettes are dancing nigh the water, moon and eclipsed sky Crystal Clear Poetry Contest Sponsored by Joseph May May 1, 2019 #2

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/18/2019 12:38:00 PM

Just lovely! Panagitota

Jan Allison

Date: 5/13/2019 4:53:00 PM

such beautiful imagery and rhyme Ralph, shame about the missing syllable its a winner in my eyes:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/9/2019 8:30:00 AM

So pretty! Good luck in the contest Ralph.

Ralph Sergi
Date: 5/9/2019 10:56:00 AM

Hi RICHARD: I left one syllable out. (oops)

Ralph Sergi

Date: 5/9/2019 7:46:00 AM

Hi Connie: Thank you but I left one syllable out.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/9/2019 3:10:00 AM

I really loved this one Ralph! You could make this 17 syllables really easy. Like: the water, and moon with eclipsed sky. I hate it that this beauty didn't make the list. xxoo

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/8/2019 7:39:00 PM

I adore the dreamy and romantic spirit of your poem, Ralph. So much vibrancy in such a short piece, my friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Ralph Sergi
Date: 5/18/2019 9:08:00 PM

carpe diem done over

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2019 3:36:00 PM

this is so clever, Ralph. I love it! Is it not on the list? I see it is 16 syllables and not 17. Maybe for that reason? So beautiful this little poem.

Ralph Sergi
Date: 5/5/2019 9:10:00 PM

Hi Andrea: If it was 17 syllables, then I lost.

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/4/2019 5:55:00 PM

Wow! Ralph, You painted a lovely picture with words! The photo and the poem compliments each other well. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis

Ralph Sergi
Date: 5/5/2019 8:01:00 AM

Sorry, I meant Alexis!

Ralph Sergi
Date: 5/5/2019 8:00:00 AM

ThanK you, Alexus!