Dance Till Dawn

Magical Moment by Christopher Clark We dance carefree at night beneath sea of starlight. Afloat in your strong arms, I fall for gallant charms. With head upon your chest, till dawn, love is expressed. We linger in a kiss and stir feelings of bliss! Written 7/3/20 Contest - Verses in Essence Sponsor - Joseph May

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/5/2020 2:24:00 AM

An Awesome verse for the contest, you have captured the essence of love in a few brief lines, well penned my friend and good luck in the contest. Blessings, Jennifer.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/6/2020 8:49:00 PM

Thank you, Jennifer...so sweet of you! Blessings, Rhonda xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/3/2020 9:26:00 PM

Ah Rhonda so tender and romantic.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/6/2020 8:48:00 PM

Thanks, Caren. :) Rhonda xx

John Watt

Date: 7/3/2020 6:36:00 PM

Rhonda, what a magical merging of painting and romantic words. You've distilled so many acts and emotions of love into 8 short lines. Well done, I love it, best wishes in the contest ~ John

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 7/6/2020 8:48:00 PM

Thank you, John. :) Rhonda xx