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Damn This Loving Heart

Barren through the till a never ending churn the tips with time turn but what is the same they only change the name living lies under an artificial sky sunshine sparks attention where chained is the affection an infection spreading thin and dire is her sin change me with the mountains the rocks come crumbling down never heard a sound free falling the abyss hungers shrouded we don't know when further away but the edge is near do goodbye's really make it disappear mysteries lie in the wisteria unraveled life breaks apart lilac stains a wounded wonderer damn this loving heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/19/2018 9:32:00 PM
I read this twice and I'm with Jan, I prefer your sweet and romantic muse. Although this one is sad but I still enjoyed the read... hugs :)
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Date: 3/19/2018 4:39:00 PM
Hearts are treacherous and not to be trusted. I've cursed my own for loving the wrong person. I love the last verse most of all, Tim.
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Date: 3/19/2018 2:49:00 PM
another heartbreaker of a poem Tim - I especially love the imagery in the final stanza. I hope your romantic muse comes back soon!:-) hugs jan xx
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