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Damage

I tell you that love happened first, In order In that order— which is to be opened, Flayed the heart that at first flinched When the soul would blench at the sound of your voice That once was love, turned destroyer, You ask me if it was the chicken or the egg? I can’t say, I know my heart quivering beating jelly pulpy thing Would bet on the egg. I know that heart then liquefies and pours itself out in a massive torrential hemorrhage Painting the pathway crimson Congeals reconstitutes and reassembles into bricks, That creates a wall that I place neatly back in my chest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/21/2016 8:47:00 AM
Your poem was awesome, creative and unique..Thank you for entering my Preterition Contest..I am sorry for being so long in congratulating you but things have been happening here that I could not control..Congratulations on your placement..Sara ...There are many of these people floating through life leaving all kinds of disaster in their wake..This needs to be out there so people can know about them and avoid them at all costs..
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Toni Orban
Date: 1/1/2017 11:34:00 PM
Sara, I have added about five new poems over the last couple weeks. Stop by should you have the time. Toni O.
Date: 5/18/2016 5:03:00 AM
Greetings Toni. Congrats for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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