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Dabs of Halloween

Written by Gail DeBole My laughing paintbrush Amuses the canvas with Many mornings and tickles Two half-polished pumpkins. Cobwebs of cornstalk Casually poise on the Pumpkins and branch into The air like pick-up sticks. A stroke of orange Pumpkin gets Lost on my cheek. The camouflaged children Have come and gone. Two pumpkins helplessly smile On the itchy rug. The third is in the oven... Becoming more like the Hairline of a balding man The longer it bakes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/20/2012 6:22:00 PM
nicely penned Gail...
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Date: 11/3/2012 2:09:00 PM
I love your poem... i had fun...lol..enjoyed your poem~always~LINDA
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Date: 10/18/2012 7:45:00 AM
Interesting work..Very descriptive of this season..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara
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Date: 10/16/2012 7:11:00 AM
Fun to read! I also liked the 'camouflaged children."
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Date: 10/13/2012 7:28:00 AM
Very nice. I like the way you describe trick or treaters as camouflaged children.
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Date: 10/13/2012 7:04:00 AM
Deeeelightful my dear Gail! A fun time of the year for sure... loved it! Love and big goulish hugs, Jack
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Date: 10/13/2012 6:16:00 AM
A fun day for both adults and children :) - Great written Gail - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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