Culling

From loss, Love’s searching might Kill doves with pine and spite ------------------ Entrant: Rob Carmack Contest: In it's Essence Form: Verse : Essence 10.12.14

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Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/29/2015 11:55:00 PM

Cleverly contrived with a pleasing rhyme and cadence. So much inferred in so few words... Bravo my friend! Best wishes, Keith

Julia Ward

Date: 9/28/2015 1:18:00 AM

I like this... A good description of love on the rebound. Hugs.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/19/2014 11:04:00 AM

amazing, it creates a vivid scene in my mind,rob.. . thanks for making my contest a special one.. congrats!

Rob Carmack
Date: 10/20/2014 4:22:00 PM

You are welcome, and thank you too.

Rob Carmack

Date: 10/15/2014 11:46:00 PM

I want to thank everyone for reading and commenting.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2014 3:48:00 PM

Hey, I see this one won. BIG congrats, Rob.

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 10/15/2014 12:17:00 PM

Wonderful,a super one that will lead anyday; congrats Rob.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/15/2014 11:36:00 AM

Beautiful expressions, congrats on the win, carmack

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/15/2014 10:35:00 AM

Well done, this one sings. Congratulations on your fine win.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/15/2014 9:56:00 AM

many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/15/2014 8:42:00 AM

Congratulations with love and prayers, Gina

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/15/2014 8:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Rob.